I landed on the wrong planet

The bell chimed as he walked in for the second time. "Hey! It's been a while," said the man at the bar. "I need a drink," said he as he shook his head, trying to dispel the uncomfortable truth repeatedly spanking him sensuously. And that is how we find our hero, sipping something muddy on another planet.

Name:
Location: Yaadhum Oore. Yaavarum Kelir

I am a bad imitation of don Quixote.

Tuesday, June 02, 2009

Martian Interlude

Burn slow, baby. Burn slow.

Rainforests, Pine forests, multiplexes and cigarettes. School buses, French kisses, video tapes and apocalypse. Fire in the mountain, run, run, run! Pyre at the count of ten, run, run, run! Run through the dirty lane, run through the street. Run through the plastic shop selling plastic beet.

Come through my open door.

Come through the fire.

Swim through the dirty soul.

Swim into desire.

Foggy breath and sweaty lips. Burning bush and seething crown. Why do we touch, why do we kiss? Is it the fire or is it the smoke?

Oil fields and broken beads – empty teats and parched feet. Jarring beats and famous cheats. Oh, how they burn! How they bleat!

They bleat and moan, pitiful and low.

But you burn slow, baby. Burn slow.

8 Comments:

Blogger amrit said...

Ha ha - this was funny. I liked it. :)

5:17 PM  
Anonymous Neelabh said...

It reminds me of Jim Morrison. Nice write though..

6:00 PM  
Blogger Sanity in a world of Insanity is insane said...

Quite a shade of Billy Joe

4:47 PM  
Anonymous Kanna said...

I don't completely get it, but I somehow just *know* it's kickass!

3:50 PM  
Blogger Confused Martian said...

@ Neelabh

Ahhh Morrison. That bad boy who was asked to sit in the Poet's Corner. *sigh* If only...

@ Kanna

It feels good to be not understood! But this is just an experiment as usual. Not all ambiguities in here were intended.

6:40 PM  
Blogger Rajan said...

Erotic.....

5:48 AM  
Blogger Confused Martian said...

@Rajan

Knew you would say that! :D

10:01 PM  
Blogger Rajan said...

its unfortunate, how good stuff come rare...write something dude...its almost time....even if its random musing..

6:17 AM  

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